Hi abby!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm [이름], i just finished my class which always made me bored and tired In the campus. Before meeting my friends, i checked out your comments alone, and i'm repeating your fixed sentences in my mind.(that is useful way to increase my skills in the public area.) Thanks for your teaching, I just leave short messages. See you tomorrow.!!^d^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You’re such a wonderful person. I’m so glad to have you as my student. You are very responsive in our class. It’s good to know that you always look into the corrections, this could help you a lot in mastering your skills. Anyway, always remember that there will always be success to people who are patient and enthusiastic in learning.
ABBY =)
I'm [이름], i just finished my class which always made me bored and tired In the campus.
>> I’m [이름], I just finished my class which always makes me bored and tired in the campus.
Before meeting my friends, i checked out your comments alone, and i'm repeating your fixed sentences in my mind.(that is useful way to increase my skills in the public area.)
>> Before meeting my friends, I checked out your comments and repeatedly listened to the recording for my corrections which could help me a lot in increasing my skills especially in public conversations.
Thanks for your teaching, I just leave short messages. See you tomorrow.!!^d^
>> Thanks for teaching me, I wrote this message for you. See you tomorrow!!! ^_^
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