Hi, Abegail~^^

2010-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 ali

학생이 쓴 원문

I read your comments on last Friday's class. This morning you tried to ask me about my trip to the rural area and the worship services I'd had there? ^^ Let me explain more... Last Thursday I went to the place where people who want to worship God and pray to Him gather together. It's similar to church but not exactly like. Anyway, at there, I can focus on God more than I can do in my regular circumstances.

강사 첨삭

Great job on this composition, [이름], there are minimal mistakes and I’m so happy that you were able to express your ideas in writing clearly. See you in class!   I read your comments on last Friday's class. >>> correct So, this morning you tried to ask me about my trip to the rural area and the worship services I'd had there? ^^ >>>CorrectLet me explain more... Last Thursday I went to the place where people who want to worship God and pray to Him gather together. >>>CorrectIt's similar to church but not exactly like. >>>It’s similar to a church but not exactly like that.Anyway, at there, I can focus on God more than I can do in my regular circumstances. >>>Anyway, there (or in there), I can focus on God more than I can in my regular circumstances.Because I kept thinking that I needed those time sometimes, I delayed my tutoring schedule and all the study plans and went there by myself. >>> Because I kept thinking that I needed those times sometimes, I delayed my tutoring schedule and all the study plans and went there by myself. I was supposed to meet my friends on Saturday in a different rural area, so I moved to the place on Saturday morning and met them. >>>Correct

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