Hi, Abegail~^^
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I read your comments on last Friday's class.
This morning you tried to ask me about my trip to the rural area and the worship services I'd had there? ^^
Let me explain more...
Last Thursday I went to the place where people who want to worship God and pray to Him gather together.
It's similar to church but not exactly like.
Anyway, at there, I can focus on God more than I can do in my regular circumstances.
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Great job on this composition, [이름], there are minimal mistakes and I’m so happy that you were able to express your ideas in writing clearly. See you in class!
I read your comments on last Friday's class.
>>> correct
So, this morning you tried to ask me about my trip to the rural area and the worship services I'd had there? ^^
>>>CorrectLet me explain more... Last Thursday I went to the place where people who want to worship God and pray to Him gather together.
>>>CorrectIt's similar to church but not exactly like.
>>>It’s similar to a church but not exactly like that.Anyway, at there, I can focus on God more than I can do in my regular circumstances.
>>>Anyway, there (or in there), I can focus on God more than I can in my regular circumstances.Because I kept thinking that I needed those time sometimes, I delayed my tutoring schedule and all the study plans and went there by myself.
>>> Because I kept thinking that I needed those times sometimes, I delayed my tutoring schedule and all the study plans and went there by myself.
I was supposed to meet my friends on Saturday in a different rural area, so I moved to the place on Saturday morning and met them.
>>>Correct
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