Hi, Abegail~~~
학생이 쓴 원문
Because I kept thinking that I needed those time sometimes, I delayed my tutoring schedule and all the study plans and went there by myself.
I was supposed to meet my friends on Saturday in a different rural area, so I moved to the place on Saturday morning and met them.
That's why I came back to Seoul last night. ^^
I had a great time in both places, and I'll tell you more about the details regarding my trip and the reason why I went there later.^^
Bye~~~~~~~
강사 첨삭
Because I kept thinking that I needed those time sometimes, I delayed my tutoring schedule and all the study plans and went there by myself.
>>> Because I kept thinking that I needed those times sometimes, I delayed my tutoring schedule and all the study plans and went there by myself.
I was supposed to meet my friends on Saturday in a different rural area, so I moved to the place on Saturday morning and met them.That's why I came back to Seoul last night. ^^
>>>CorrectI had a great time in both places, and I'll tell you more about the details regarding my trip and the reason why I went there later.^^Bye~~~~~~~
>>>Correct
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