Hi again : )
학생이 쓴 원문
(This text is connected with the back one.)
Answer: At first, I have 4 family members. Father mother one older sister and me. but my sister has got married. so she lives with my brother in law.
Our family is such super normal family in Korea. there are not any problems, struggles un our family. we are happy enough as much as I satisfy.
Answer: My father used to teach me about financial planing. he always emphasize me to save money and to do not barrow money from anyone.
He used to say "there is nothing free."
Oh..my..What a elementary school student's sentences! T-T.
Thank you for your correction. See you tomorrow~!
강사 첨삭
Hi there again..Don\'t say these are elementary school student\'s sentences. They are good and they answer the questions satisfactorily. Some of your answers though are phrased a little awkwardly. They are correct but I just changed them to sentences that sound more naturally.
T. Jennifer
(This text is connected with the one at the back .) Answer: At first, I have 4 family members. Father mother one older sister and me. but my sister has got married. so she lives with my brother in law.
>>There used to be 4 of us in the family: my father, mother, older sister and me. But my sister has got married and so she now lives with my brother-in-law.Our family is such super normal family in Korea. there are not any problems, struggles un our family. we are happy enough as much as I satisfy.
>> We are a normal Korean family. We have never had any special problems or struggles. We are happy enough to say that we are satisfied.Answer: My father used to teach me about financial planing. he always emphasize me to save money and to do not barrow money from anyone.
>> My father used to teach me about financial planning. He always emphasizes on me to save and not to borrow money from anyone.He used to say \"there is nothing free.\">>He used to say, \"There is nothing free.\"Oh..my..What a elementary school student\'s sentences! T-T.
>>Oh..my..What an elementary school student\'s sentences! T-T.Thank you for your correction. See you tomorrow~!
>> Correct!
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