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2014-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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I got your interesting homework topic! If I were a super hero, I would have a power that can stop the time. In Korea's famous TV drama which is broadcasted nowadays, A man from other planet has been liwing for 400 years. And he is keep saveing and helping a pretty woman. Above all, his most interesting power is to stop the time. So, I was very impressivea and I think time is the most unchangeable thing to everyone. If I have that power, I can save innocent people! And I'll call myself a 'Time-girl'!

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Hello [이름]! I am glad to hear you find this homework interesting. ^^ Thank you for sharing your creative thoughts! If I were a superhero, I would also want to have the power to stop the time. So if I want to be with the one I love, I can just stop the time so we can be together without limits. Hahaha! Call you again tomorrow! Good night! ~Teacher Alice I got your interesting homework topic! >> I got your interesting homework topic! If I were a super hero, I would have a power that can stop the time. >> If I were a superhero, I would have the power to stop the time. In Korea\'s famous TV drama which is broadcasted nowadays, A man from other planet has been liwing for 400 years. >> In Korea\'s famous TV drama which is being aired these days, a man from other planet has been living for 400 years.   And he is keep saveing and helping a pretty woman. >> And he keeps saving and helping a pretty woman.   Above all, his most interesting power is to stop the time. >> Above all, his most interesting power is to stop the time.   So, I was very impressivea and I think time is the most unchangeable thing to everyone. >> So, I was very impressed and I think time is the most unchangeable thing to everyone. If I have that power, I can save innocent people! >> Correct! And I\'ll call myself a \'Time-girl\'! >> And I\'ll call myself \"Time-Girl\"!

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