Hi~ Ali~
학생이 쓴 원문
As you know, I started to study English again for changing my job.
And I realized that I forget many vocabularies, grammars and expressions.. In fact I lost my confidence a lot about teaching English. However, I'm not gonna give up so, I hope you will help me;;
I am so happy to study English with you. Thank you~
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [Name]! Don뭪 worry, I will assist you the best way I can so you can review and polish the English skils that you already have. I believe that you have very high potential and given the proper time and constant practice, you can be a great speaker someday. As we converse and have the class everyday, you will build up your confidence and you can then speak fluently in time. See you tomorrow and great job on this composition!
Ali
As you know, I started to study English again for changing my job.
>>> Correct
>>> OR: As you know, I started to study English again to prepare for changing my job.
And I realized that I forget many vocabularies, grammars and expressions..
>>> And I realized that I forget many vocabularies, grammar patterns and expressions..
>>> OR: And I realized that I have forgotten many vocabularies, grammar patterns and expressions..
In fact I lost my confidence a lot about teaching English.
>>>Correct
>>> OR: In fact, I have lost a lot of confidence in teaching English.
However, I'm not gonna give up so, I hope you will help me;;
>>> (Use of punctuations) However, I'm not gonna give up; so, I hope you will help me.
I am so happy to study English with you. Thank you~
>>> Correct; (I뭢 happy to have class with you, too!)
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