Hi~ Ali~

2010-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

학생이 쓴 원문

I am so sorry about missing your calls for three days. (ㅜ.ㅜ;;) I was so sick because of a terrible cold. I had sore throat and fever. I felt ache all over my body last two days. Also I couldn't speak at all. That's why I couldn't answer your call. But now I feel much better. Sorry again, Ali.. I believe you'll understand. Anyway, I hope to continue to study English with you. One month already has gone. Time is so fast.. Let's talk more on Monday! Have a nice weekend~

강사 첨삭

Hello and nice to hear from you Ms. [Name]! It's sad that you have a terrible cold, so now I know why you weren't able to answer my calls, don't worry, of course I understand and I just hope you get well soon and we can have class again. Take care of yourself and have a wonderful weekend with your family! =) By the way, I'm impressed with this composition. You only had one grammar mistake, wow! Great job! =) Ali   I am so sorry about missing your calls for three days. >>> CorrectI was so sick because of a terrible cold. >>> CorrectI had sore throat and fever. >>> Correct I felt ache all over my body last two days. >>> I felt ache all over my body for the last two days. Also I couldn't speak at all. >>> Correct That's why I couldn't answer your call. >>> CorrectBut now I feel much better. Sorry again, Ali..I believe you'll understand. >>> CorrectAnyway, I hope to continue to study English with you. >>> Correct >>> OR: Anyway, I hope to study English with you continuously.One month already has gone. >>> Correct >>>OR: One month has already gone. Time is so fast.. >>> CorrectLet's talk more on Monday! >>> CorrectHave a nice weekend~ >>> Correct

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