Hi~ Ali~
학생이 쓴 원문
I am so sorry about missing your calls for three days. (ㅜ.ㅜ;;)
I was so sick because of a terrible cold.
I had sore throat and fever. I felt ache all over my body last two days. Also I couldn't speak at all. That's why I couldn't answer your call.
But now I feel much better. Sorry again, Ali..
I believe you'll understand.
Anyway, I hope to continue to study English with you.
One month already has gone. Time is so fast..
Let's talk more on Monday!
Have a nice weekend~
강사 첨삭
Hello and nice to hear from you Ms. [Name]! It's sad that you have a terrible cold, so now I know why you weren't able to answer my calls, don't worry, of course I understand and I just hope you get well soon and we can have class again. Take care of yourself and have a wonderful weekend with your family! =) By the way, I'm impressed with this composition. You only had one grammar mistake, wow! Great job! =)
Ali
I am so sorry about missing your calls for three days.
>>> CorrectI was so sick because of a terrible cold.
>>> CorrectI had sore throat and fever.
>>> Correct
I felt ache all over my body last two days.
>>> I felt ache all over my body for the last two days.
Also I couldn't speak at all.
>>> Correct
That's why I couldn't answer your call.
>>> CorrectBut now I feel much better. Sorry again, Ali..I believe you'll understand. >>> CorrectAnyway, I hope to continue to study English with you.
>>> Correct
>>> OR: Anyway, I hope to study English with you continuously.One month already has gone.
>>> Correct
>>>OR: One month has already gone.
Time is so fast..
>>> CorrectLet's talk more on Monday!
>>> CorrectHave a nice weekend~
>>> Correct
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