Hi Alice!

2012-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Hi Alice! It's been a long time no writting. I was very busy during this September. Even, I didn't have time to take care of myself. I realized I'm getting keen because I felt tired and there were a lot of works. Also, Some works were not going well. I must handle the Samsung Shipyard. So, sometimes I need to be strong to conduct my job. I think men's works are a little bit tough. When I do like a lion then the yard follows my order well but when I do softly then they do not work well. I like this job because this job give me a challenge. ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi there Mr. A-Class! A colorful Monday to you! Well I know you enjoy your job because it gives you challenges. That\'s how you can be a better person and a more effective leader. I just hope all the mishandlings will be fixed this week so you won\'t have a headache again. Anyway, got to tell you something later. See you [이름]! ~Teacher Alice Hi Alice! >> Correct!It\'s been a long time no writting. >> OR It\'s been a long time time no write.I was very busy during this September. >> I have been very busy this September.Even, I didn\'t have time to take care of myself. >> I don\'t have even time to take care of myself.I realized I\'m getting keen because I felt tired and there were a lot of works. >> The word *keen means having or showing great mental penetration or acumen (keen reasoning; a keen mind) or it is also characterized by strength and distinctness of perception; extremely sensitive or responsive (keen eyes; keen ears). >> I realized I\'m getting dull because I always feel tired and there were a lot of work to accomplish.Also, Some works were not going well. >> Also, some of my work were not going well. I must handle the Samsung Shipyard. >> Correct! So, sometimes I need to be strong to conduct my job. >> Correct! >> OR So sometimes I need to be strong to control my job. >> OR So sometimes I need to be strong to execute my functions well. I think men\'s works are a little bit tough. >> I think men\'s work is a little tough. >> OR I think men\'s work is quite tough.When I do like a lion then the yard follows my order well but when I do softly then they do not work well. >> When I work like a lion then the yard follows my order righteously but when I talk gently then they do not work well. I like this job because this job give me a challenge. ^^ >> I like this job because this job gives me challenge. ^^

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