Hi Alice!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Alice!
It's been a long time no writting.
I was very busy during this September.
Even, I didn't have time to take care of myself.
I realized I'm getting keen because I felt tired and there were a lot of works.
Also, Some works were not going well.
I must handle the Samsung Shipyard. So, sometimes I need to be strong to conduct my job. I think men's works are a little bit tough.
When I do like a lion then the yard follows my order well but when I do softly then they do not work well.
I like this job because this job give me a challenge.
^^
강사 첨삭
Hi there Mr. A-Class!
A colorful Monday to you!
Well I know you enjoy your job because it gives you challenges. That\'s how you can be a better person and a more effective leader.
I just hope all the mishandlings will be fixed this week so you won\'t have a headache again.
Anyway, got to tell you something later. See you [이름]!
~Teacher Alice
Hi Alice!
>> Correct!It\'s been a long time no writting.
>> OR It\'s been a long time time no write.I was very busy during this September.
>> I have been very busy this September.Even, I didn\'t have time to take care of myself.
>> I don\'t have even time to take care of myself.I realized I\'m getting keen because I felt tired and there were a lot of works.
>> The word *keen means having or showing great mental penetration or acumen (keen reasoning; a keen mind) or it is also characterized by strength and distinctness of perception; extremely sensitive or responsive (keen eyes; keen ears).
>> I realized I\'m getting dull because I always feel tired and there were a lot of work to accomplish.Also, Some works were not going well.
>> Also, some of my work were not going well. I must handle the Samsung Shipyard.
>> Correct!
So, sometimes I need to be strong to conduct my job.
>> Correct!
>> OR So sometimes I need to be strong to control my job.
>> OR So sometimes I need to be strong to execute my functions well.
I think men\'s works are a little bit tough.
>> I think men\'s work is a little tough.
>> OR I think men\'s work is quite tough.When I do like a lion then the yard follows my order well but when I do softly then they do not work well.
>> When I work like a lion then the yard follows my order righteously but when I talk gently then they do not work well. I like this job because this job give me a challenge. ^^
>> I like this job because this job gives me challenge. ^^
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