Hi! Alice~

2014-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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When people realize limitation of their's own self, most of people give up to go ro their dream. But, if they spend a little bit more time and believe themselves, the way to go to dream would be open again. However, I think person is weak, so the people who leap themselves can achieve their dream finally, and I wish l could be that person.

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Very good point, [이름][이름]! I believe you can achieve your dream! Just keep believing and make it happen. Good night! ~Teacher Alice   When people realize limitation of their\'s own self, most of people give up to go ro their dream. >> When people realize the limitation of their\'s own self, most of them give up to go after their dream. But, if they spend a little bit more time and believe themselves, the way to go to dream would be open again. >> But, if they spend a little more time and believe in themselves, the way to go to their dream would be open again. However, I think person is weak, so the people who leap themselves can achieve their dream finally, and I wish l could be that person. >> However, I think some people are weak, so the people who leap themselves can achieve their dream finally, and I wish l could be that person.

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