Hi! Alice~
학생이 쓴 원문
When people realize limitation of their's own self, most of people give up to go ro their dream. But, if they spend a little bit more time and believe themselves, the way to go to dream would be open again. However, I think person is weak, so the people who leap themselves can achieve their dream finally, and I wish l could be that person.
강사 첨삭
Very good point, [이름][이름]!
I believe you can achieve your dream!
Just keep believing and make it happen.
Good night!
~Teacher Alice
When people realize limitation of their\'s own self, most of people give up to go ro their dream.
>> When people realize the limitation of their\'s own self, most of them give up to go after their dream.
But, if they spend a little bit more time and believe themselves, the way to go to dream would be open again.
>> But, if they spend a little more time and believe in themselves, the way to go to their dream would be open again.
However, I think person is weak, so the people who leap themselves can achieve their dream finally, and I wish l could be that person.
>> However, I think some people are weak, so the people who leap themselves can achieve their dream finally, and I wish l could be that person.
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