Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for sending a composition.
I hope you\'re doing well.
I am so touched to read what you wrote.
Not a lot of people notice the struggles of others,
so it\'s very kind of you to see it.
I wish someday someone actually invents that drug.
~~t. Ally
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If I could invent something, I would like to invent a new drug that would comfortably end the world.
>> If I could invent something, I would like to invent a new drug that would allow dying people to leave this world comfortably.
because,I was heartbroken to see the old people around me die painfully for a long time.
>> Because I always get heartbroken whenever I see old people around me die painfully for a prolonged period of time.
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