Hi, Ally!

2018-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Answer this question in 3 sentences: If you had the chance to talk to your President, what would you tell him? If I had the chance to meet and speak to the president, I would say, "Don't try too much in your term." And I would say, "Work to become a common sense society where laws are obeyed." Lastly, I would like to say, "Work to become a society that we are rewarded as much as we try."

강사 첨삭

Thank you so much for sending a composition, [이름]!

I like the things you want to tell the President. ^^

I appreciate how proactive you are towards your government.

See you in class.

~~t. Ally

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If I had the chance to meet and speak to the president, I would say, \"Don\'t try too much in your term.\"

>> CORRECT!

And I would say, \"Work to become a common sense society where laws are obeyed.\"

>> And I would say, \"Work on becoming a society with common sense and obeys laws.\"

Lastly, I would like to say, \"Work to become a society that we are rewarded as much as we try.\"

>> Lastly, I would like to say, \"Work on becoming a society that is rewarded in conjunction to the efforts we make.\"

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