Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Answer this question in 3 sentences:
If you could name your own star, what would you name it and why?
I've never thought about my stars.
If I 'll give a name on a star, I would like to make the North star my star.
Because the North Star always gives directions.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for that answer Teacher Son. ^^
I hope you\'re doing well.
I can feel that your answer comes from the point of view of a leader.
I like it very much. ^^
~~t. Ally
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I\'ve never thought about my stars.
>> CORRECT!
If I \'ll give a name on a star, I would like to make the North star my star.
>> If I\'ll give my star a name, I would like to name it the North star too.
Because the North Star always gives directions.
>> CORRECT!
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