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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Answer this question in 4 sentences:
What do you think is the most practical solution to stop using gadgets too much?
I tend not to use gadgets much.
Young people these days use gadgets too often and rely heavily.
Even young students are addicted to gaddgets.
I think that the way to reduce the use of gadgets is to read, exercise, and self-control.
강사 첨삭
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Answer this question in 4 sentences:
What do you think is the most practical solution to stop using gadgets too much?
I tend not to use gadgets much.
>> I tend not to use gadgets frequently.
or
>> I don\'t use my phone every now and then.
Young people these days use gadgets too often and rely heavily.
>> Young people these days use gadgets too often and rely on it heavily.
Even young students are addicted to gaddgets.
>> Correct
I think that the way to reduce the use of gadgets is to read, exercise, and self-control.
>> Correct
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