Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Answer this question in 4 sentences:
What does your favorite beverage or drink remind you of?
I like alcoholic beverages.
Especially, I like Soju and Makgeolli, our traditional liquor.
I don't like non-alcoholic drinks, so I'd rather drink water.
Drinking alcohol in moderation makes me feel better and healthy.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sir Son!
I agree with you.
Drinking alcohol in moderation has a lot good effects for our body.
Thank you for sending me this composition.
See you in class!^^
~~t. Ally
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I like alcoholic beverages.
>> CORRECT!
Especially, I like Soju and Makgeolli, our traditional liquor.
>> I especially like Soju and Makgeolli, our traditional liquor.
I don\'t like non-alcoholic drinks, so I\'d rather drink water.
>> CORRECT!
Drinking alcohol in moderation makes me feel better and healthy.
>> CORRECT!
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