Hi, Ally!

2018-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Answer this question in 4 sentences: What is love? How do you express your love for other people? There are many kinds of love, for example, love for family, love for children, love for between men and women, and love for colleagues. I believe that love is basically based on sacrifice. I think love continues through self-sacrifice and perseverance. I think love is noble and lasting when I love others at the expense of myself.

강사 첨삭

Hi Sir Son!

Once again, you never fail to inspire me with your compositions.

I agree with your perspective about love. ^^

I think your family is very blessed to have a son, husband, and father like you.

~~t. Ally

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There are many kinds of love, for example, love for family, love for
children, love for between men and women, and love for colleagues.
>> There are many kinds of love, for example: Love for family, love for children, romantic love and friendly love.

I believe that love is basically based on sacrifice.
>> CORRECT!

I think love continues through self-sacrifice and perseverance.
>> CORRECT!

I think love is noble and lasting when I love others at the expense of myself.

>> I think love is noble and lasting, and when I love others, I love them at the expense of myself.

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