Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hey Sir Son!
I hope the situation gets better.
It\'s very proactive of you to try and help out.
Keep up the great spirit. ^^
~~t. Ally
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These days, fine dust is serious in Korea.
>> These days, the fine dust is serious in Korea.
Most of the fine dust comes from China along with the west wind to Korea.
>> CORRECT!
However, fine dust is often made at coal-fired power plants and factories in Korea.
>> CORRECT!
I need to make efforts to reduce fine dust, whether it is in China or Korea, to plant trees and remove the sources of fine dust in China.
>> In order to reduce the fine dust, whether it is in China or Korea, we have to plant trees and remove the sources of fine dust in China.
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