Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
Answer the question in 4 sentences:
If you could visit any country in the world, where would you go and why?
I have already been to about 20 countries and Philippines twice.
I want to backpack around the world after I retire.
Especially, I want to find historical traces of Europe.
And I want to walk to the ancient civilizations of South America.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir Son!
Wow!
I am so happy to hear that you have travelled to so many countries. ^^
I think your dream of backpacking around the world will come true.
You are very persevering and I am quite inspired by you.
~~t. Ally
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I have already been to about 20 countries and Philippines twice.
>> CORRECT!
I want to backpack around the world after I retire.
>> CORRECT!
Especially, I want to find historical traces of Europe.
>> I especially want to find some historical traces of Europe.
And I want to walk to the ancient civilizations of South America.
>> CORRECT!
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