Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Sir Son!
It\'s also the same case here in the Philippines.
I understand how difficult it must be to take on all of those responsibilities.
But I am sure your parents are very proud of you and your achievements. ^^
~~t. Ally
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If I change my life to someone, I want to be born as a second or third son, not a first son.
>> If I could exchange lives with someone, I want to be born as a second or third son and not the first.
In Korea, being born as a first son carries a lot of responsibility to one\'s parents.
>> CORRECT!
Especially, it is very difficult when parents are older and need to take care of themselves.
>> Especially because it\'s very difficult when parents get older and they need someone to take care of them other than themselves.
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