Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Answer this question in 3 sentences:
What is your favorite season? Why?
My favorite season is spring,because new life is born.
Summer is too hot, and fall somehow becomes lonely with age.
Also, I hate winter because it is cold and spooky.
My favorite season is spring
강사 첨삭
Hi Sir Son!
I enjoyed reading your composition. ^^
I like how you related every season life itself.
~~t. Ally
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My favorite season is spring,because new life is born.
>> My favorite season is spring because in this season, new life is born.
Summer is too hot, and fall somehow becomes lonely with age.
>> CORRECT!
Also, I hate winter because it is cold and spooky.
>> CORRECT!
My favorite season is spring
>> That is why my favorite season is spring.
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