Hi, Ally!

Hi sir Son!

Once again, this composition is full of insights!

I enjoyed reading it very much. ^^

You inspire a lot of students to do better in school.

~~t. Ally

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 I think my biggest moment of life change is college entrance.
>> I think my biggest life changing moment was when I entered college.

 Everyone is constantly forced to make choices.
>> CORRECT!

 To make a good choice, I think we should read a lot, see a lot, and experience a lot.
>> CORRECT!

 Also, I think it is very lucky to meet a great mentor.
>> Also, I think I was very lucky to meet a great mentor.

 For example, where do you go to college? or which subject you go to probably determine your life.
>> For example, what college you go to or which subject you want to determine your life.

 For example, are you going to Seoul, or to the provinces, or to go to the teachers\' college or engineering college? I think this determines your future.
>> Are you going to Seoul or to the provinces, or to go to the teachers\' college or Engineering college? I think these things determines your future.

 Living in a good place has the advantage of seeing a better place.
>> Living in a good place gives you the advantage of seeing better places.

 So I make students experience more, because they can make better choices.

>> So I let my students experience more so that they can make better choices.