Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi sir Son!
I\'m glad you have people who you can confide your secrets to. ^^
You are correct, some secrets are meant to be kept to yourself, and ultimately forgotten.
~~t. Ally
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A secret that doesn\'t matter much to me usually talks to my wife.
>> I usually tell secrets that don\'t matter much to me to wife.
I also discuss with my best friend who will keep a secret.
>> I also discuss them with my best friend who can keep secrets.
But the secret that really needs to be kept secret is not telling anyone but trying to forget it.
>> But as for the secrets that really need to be kept to myself, I tell no one and try to forget them.
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