Hi, Ally!
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Answer the question in 5 sentences:
What are the things that money can't buy?
There are many things in the world that money cannot buy.
First, you cannot buy a family with money. no amount of money can buy and sell my family.
Also, money cannot buy happiness, age of person, health, natural disaster etc.
Everyone dies when he is old.
So everyone has to be humble in front of nature and God.
강사 첨삭
Hey sir Son!
This is a very nice composition. ^^
I enjoyed it very much.
~~t. Ally
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There are many things in the world that money cannot buy.
>> CORRECT!
First, you cannot buy a family with money. No amount of money can buy and sell my family.
>> CORRECT!
Also, money cannot buy happiness, age of person, health, natural disaster etc.
>> Also, money cannot buy happiness, the age of a person, health, natural disasters and many more.
Everyone dies when he is old.
>> Everyone dies when they are old.
So everyone has to be humble in front of nature and God.
>> CORRECT!
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