Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi sir Son!
This is a nice composition.
I do hope that these dreams of yours come true someday. ^^
~~t. Ally
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In Korea, Christmas is not a national holiday like the Philippines.
>> Unlike in the Philippines, Korea does not celebrate Christmas as a national holiday.
It is just one day of various holidays, I hope that with the grace of the Lord, not only my family but every family will become happier next year,
>> It\'s just one day filled with various holidays, I hope that with the grace of the Lord, I hope that my family and everyone else\'s families become happier next year.
And I hope that our young people will be able to realize their dreams with confidence.
>> CORRECT!
Finally, I hope to become a brighter, more transparent society.
>> Finally, I hope to have a brighter and more transparent society.
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