Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
Tell me 3 of your New Year\'s resolutions.
My New Year Hope, First, let\'s keep our health.
Secondly, I would like to make great progress in English conversation.
Finally, my family is healthy and happy, and my school runs smoothly.
강사 첨삭
Hi sir Son!
I am hopeful that all your endeavors for this year will come true. ^^
Happy new year!
~~t. Ally
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My New Year Hope, First, let\'s keep our health.
>> My hope for this new year is to first, keep our health in a good condition.
Secondly, I would like to make great progress in English conversation.
>> Second, to make great progress in English conversations.
Finally, my family is healthy and happy, and my school runs smoothly.
>> And last, for my family to be happy and healthy, and for my school to run smoothly.
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