Hi, Ally!

2019-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Answer the question in 3 sentences: What is your favorite time of the day? Why? I have the best time of day after dinner. Because it is the most relaxing and time to do with family. Also, I can read books, watch TV, and hang out with my friends.

강사 첨삭

Hi sir Son!


Yes, I agree that the best way to spend the day is to relax with your family and friends. ^^

Thank you for sending this composition.


~~t. Ally



------------------------------------




 I have the best time of day after dinner.

>> I have the best time of the day after dinner.


 Because it is the most relaxing and time to do with family.

>> Because it\'s the most relaxing time I could have with my family.


 Also, I can read books, watch TV, and hang out with my friends.

>> CORRECT!

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·