Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
Answer the question in 3 sentences.
Tell me something that annoys you.
Tell me something that annoys you.
The first thing that annoys me is the many temptations around.
The late sleep makes me lazy, and the alcohol that I eat in the evening makes my body weary.
The hard work of the day gives me stress.
강사 첨삭
Hello sir Son!
Stress and exhaustion annoys me too. ^^
But I\'m really impressed that you\'re still working hard daily despite all the stress.
Keep moving forward.
~~t. Ally
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The first thing that annoys me is the many temptations around.
>> CORRECT!
The late sleep makes me lazy, and the alcohol that I eat in the evening makes my body weary.
>> Sleeping late makes me lazy and the alcohol that I eat in the evening makes my body weary.
The hard work of the day gives me stress.
>> All the hard work needed for the day gives me stress.
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