Hi, Ally!

2019-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Answer the question in 3 sentences. If you had a friend who was having a hard time learning something, what piece of advice would you give them? Especially if he is young I will say, \"Never give up.\" For the second time, I will say, \"Never, never give up.\" And I\'d like to advise that it is also important to have a chance to recharge while looking at from a little distance while resting for a while.

강사 첨삭

Hi sir Son!

I agree with that advice.

I think I will also take it if I heard such things from you. ^^

Thank you for sending an inspirational composition.

~~t. Ally

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Especially if he is young I will say, \"Never give up.\"

>> If the person is young, I will say, \"Never give up.\"

For the second time, I will say, \"Never, never give up.\"
>> For the second time, I will say. \"Never, ever, give up.\"

And I\'d like to advise that it is also important to have a chance to recharge while looking at from a little distance while resting for a while.

>> And I\'d also like to advise that it is important to have a chance to recharge while looking at the situation from a short distance away. It\'s okay to rest for awhile.

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