Hi, Ally!

2019-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

Fill in the blank: I want 2019 to be __________________. I want 2019 to be a lot of progress in English conversation. We also want to build an eternal peace in our country, between South Korea and North Korea. Also, I hope my school will operate smoothly and safely. *But this homework composition seems to have done a few days ago.

강사 첨삭

Hi sir Son!

The last homework regarding 2019 was about an open composition on what you yourself want to do this year. ^^

\"This 2019 I will ________________________.\"

This new one is about what you want 2019 to be, in general. ^^

I am hopeful that someday, the things you wish for your country and career will come true this year.

~~t. Ally

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I want 2019 to be a lot of progress in English conversation.

>> I want 2019 to be the year when I get a lot of progress in having English conversations.

We also want to build an eternal peace in our country, between South Korea and North Korea.

>> CORRECT!

Also, I hope my school will operate smoothly and safely.
>> Also, I hope my school will be operated smoothly and safely.

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