Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
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If I could make my own movie, it would be about my biography.
Because everybody wants to keep a record of his life.
Especially because I think I was born in a rural village and achieved my own goals for my life.
강사 첨삭
Hi sir Son!
That would be a nice anecdote about yourself.
Everyone will be reminded of your journey through life. ^^
~~t. Ally
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If I could make my own movie, it would be about my biography.
>> CORRECT!
Because everybody wants to keep a record of his life.
>> Because everybody would like to keep a record of their lives.
Especially because I think I was born in a rural village and achieved my own goals for my life.
>> CORRECT!
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