Hi, Ally!

2019-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Answer the question in not less than 3 study habits: What study habits do you have that help you learn better? First, I think curiosity is the most important, curiosity is the foundation of all research. Second, if you are motivated, you study hard, our purpose is to let us study. Lastly, you need to be strong so you can study hard, so you should always exercise.

강사 첨삭

Hi sir Son!

These study habits are quite nice! ^^

I do hope that you make use of them consistently.

That way, you\'ll keep learning new things for a whole lifetime.

~~t. Ally

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First, I think curiosity is the most important, curiosity is the foundation of all research.

>> CORRECT!

Second, if you are motivated, you study hard, our purpose is to let us study.

>> Second, I think motivation is needed for us to study harder.

Lastly, you need to be strong so you can study hard, so you should always exercise.

>> And last, you need to be strong so you can study hard, so exercise should always be done.

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