Hi, Ally!

2019-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Answer the question in not more than 4 sentences: What characteristics do you like about your parents? My father has no special characteristics. If my father only has a characteristic , there is a characteristic that is very thorough when doing something, sometimes it makes people feel cramped. My mother is a very strong obsession with her children, and also very devoted, and then we used to be so burdensome. It was also very devoted.

강사 첨삭

Hi sir Son!

I think your father likes being perfect when it comes to work.

It\'s nice that your mother is devoted to you, her children. ^^

~~t. Ally

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My father has no special characteristics.

>> CORRECT!

If my father only has a characteristic , there is a characteristic that is very thorough when doing something, sometimes it makes people feel cramped.

>> My father only has one characteristic, that characteristic is that he is very thorough when doing something, sometimes it makes people feel cramped.

My mother is a very strong obsession with her children, and also very devoted, and then we used to be so burdensome.
>> My mother has a very strong affection with her children, and also very devoted even when we used to be such big burdens.

It was also very devoted.

>> She is very devoted. (Who is very devoted in this sentence?)

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