Hi, Ally!

2019-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Answer this question in 5 sentences: Why is it important to be contented with the things we already have? In Korean proverb, \"greed calls disaster\". There is a saying. I think people have no end to greed. So, I think that satisfying the present life is the happiest and less stressful. Currently, although you are a little uncomfortable and dissatisfied, I would like to advise people that more greed is easy to fall into misery. So, there is the word \"be true to reality\".

강사 첨삭

Hi sir Son!

I like how you started your composition with a Korean proverb. ^^

This is wonderful!

I\'ll see you in class. ^^

~~t. Ally

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In Korean proverb, \"greed calls disaster\". There is a saying.

>> There is a saying from a Korean proverb that states, \"Greed calls disaster.\"

I think people have no end to greed.

>> CORRECT!

So, I think that satisfying the present life is the happiest and less stressful.

>> So, I think that being satisfied in the present life is the happiest and the least stressful.

Currently, although you are a little uncomfortable and dissatisfied, I would like to advise people that more greed is easy to fall into misery.

>> Currently, although you are a little uncomfortable and dissatisfied, I would like to advise that more having more greed makes it easier to fall into misery.

So, there is the word \"be true to reality\".

>> So, believe in the saying, \"Be true to reality\".

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