Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Son!
This is a good composition.
It really is best to not gossip at all.
In our world today it is so easy to distort stories and make other people believe false information.
That is why we must always be careful of the things we tell other people.
It\'s very hard to trust people nowadays.
~~t. Ally
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I think that it will be greatly enlarged and become a big problem.
>> I think that stories about others will be greatly enlarged and it will become a big problem.
So you should not be able to gossip as much as possible.
>> CORRECT!
And to create a healthy society, it is better to refrain from gossip.
>> CORRECT!
It is good for you to say something wrong to someone when he is wrong or when he treats someone unjustly.
>> It is okay if your say something negative about a person who has done something wrong or treats someone unjustly.
However, the gossip of a joke that is not serious seems possible.
>> However, sharing jokes with others are quite harmless.
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