Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
Answer the question in 4 sentences:
What is the role of music in your life?
I like music.
I like listening to music, but I can not sing well.
In general, Koreans are musical emotions.
So there are many bars in Korea where you can sing.
강사 첨삭
Hi Son!
Yes! I like music too. ^^
So do most Filipinos.
It\'s been a tradition to rent a karaoke machine in our own homes whenever there are special occasions. ^^
I\'m glad that you enjoy music too!
~~t. Ally
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I like music.
>> CORRECT!
I like listening to music, but I can not sing well.
>> I like listening to music, but I cannot sing well.
In general, Koreans are musical emotions.
>> In general, Koreans are emotional musicians.
So there are many bars in Korea where you can sing.
>> CORRECT!
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