Hi, Ally?
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강사 첨삭
Hi Son! ^^
I agree with your statements.
It is very important to always do our best to achieve the closest thing we can get to a perfect day! ^^
I hope you\'ve experienced plenty of close- to- perfect days in your lifetime.
~~t. Ally
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I think the perfect day is a day when there is no fuss.
>> CORRECT!
We don\'t get this day.
>> We never experience a day like this.
We find it difficult to expect a perfect day, but we think we should try to make a perfect day.
>> CORRECT!
The important thing is that it is close ㅁ perfect day, if you live hard every day.
>> The important thing is that it is close to a perfect day, if you try to live well every day.
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