Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Son! ^^
That\'s true!
Have you ever heard about the saying, \"Health is Wealth\"?
It means that our biggest wealth on this earth is our health, because without it, we won\'t be able to function well. ^^
Please do take care of your health.
~~t. Ally
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There will be many things in our lives that we fear.
>> There are many things in our lives that we fear of.
But I think the biggest fear is that I lost my health.
>> But I think my biggest fear is for me to lose my good health.
So I always tell my students that health is the most basic thing in our lives.
>> So I always tell my students that health is the most important thing in our lives.
If health is not backed up, we can not do anything to live.
>> CORRECT!
If you are not healthy, wealth and honor are useless.
>> CORRECT!
So I always tell people around me, \"My body care is the first priority.\"
>> So I always tell people around me, \"Self- care is the first priority.\"
We can challenge again if we fail in life.
>> We can take new challenges again if we fail in life.
If we lose health, we lose everything.
>> If we lose our good health, we lose everything.
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