Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Son!
A wonderful composition! ^^
I enjoyed this.
I hope you feel that your life is complete someday soon. ^^
~~t. Ally
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My life would be complete if I have steel-like health, enough money, enough time, and enough knowledge, my life will be complete.
>> My life would be complete if I have steel-like health, enough money, enough time, and enough knowledge.
But if we are not God, we do not have everything and live our lives.
>> But since we are not God, we do not have everything while living our lives.
We have to be satisfied and live in something lacking.
>> We have to be satisfied and live despite lacking some things.
We are endlessly endeavoring to be perfect as God, and can never be God.
>> We are endlessly endeavoring to be as perfect as God, but we can never be God.
So if we did our best, I think our life is complete.
>> So, if we did our best, I think our lives would be complete.
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