Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Answer this question in 3 sentences:
What made you happy this week?
I didn\'t have any alcohol yet this week, so I feeel better my health and I am in good condition.
I thought I should reduce the number of drinks in the future.
Also, I thought I was old enough to manage my health
강사 첨삭
Hi Son!
I\'m really glad to hear that you have been alcohol free this week!
I hope you keep your good health up. ^^
~~t. Ally
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I didn\'t have any alcohol yet this week, so I feeel better my health and I am in good condition.
>> I didn\'t drink any alcohol yet this week, so I feel better about my health, and I am in good condition.
I thought I should reduce the number of drinks in the future.
>> CORRECT!
Also, I thought I was old enough to manage my health
>> Also, I thought I was old enough to manage my health better.
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