Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Fill in the blank:
Wednesdays make me feel like being tired.
So I need to relax and hope to have a good time with my family.
But when I was young, I did not have such a time because I was busy with my work, but I hope to have it from now on.
강사 첨삭
Hi Son!
Yes, it is quite important to spend time with your family now.
Especially because time goes by so fast.
So we need to make the most out of every breath we take. ^^
Be with your loved ones while you can.
~~t. Ally
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Wednesdays make me feel like being tired.
>> CORRECT!
So I need to relax and hope to have a good time with my family.
>> CORRECT!
But when I was young, I did not have such a time because I was busy with my work, but I hope to have it from now on.
>> CORRECT!
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