Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Son!
That sounds nice. ^^
Nowadays, people are way into fantasy and so everyone is imagining a life much farther from reality.
I think it\'s because most people are looking for a happier reality nowadays.
~~t. Ally
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I think I saw a lot of strange scenes on TV that I do not understand.
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But I do not remember well.
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Especially in film, it shows a lot of 3D world that has not happened yet.
>> Especially in movies, it shows a lot about the 3D world that has not even happened yet.
As I get older, I hate things like imaginative movies and dramas that facts are not based on.
>> As I get older, I start to dislike things like fantasy- filled movies and dramas that are not based on facts.
What I enjoy is mainly like fact-based documentaries and historical dramas.
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