Hi, Ally!

2019-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Answer this question in 5 sentences: If today was your last day on earth, what would you do? Perhaps everyone will have different ways of ending their lives depending on the person or age if today is the end of their lives. Maybe if I were young, I would scream like a madman and complain to God to save my life. But now I will look back on my footsteps, say goodbye to my family, finish quietly and leave the world. But everyone leaves the world without warning. I also hope to leave this world while I am sleeping.

강사 첨삭

Hi Son!

I like how you made more than one possibility on how you would react if it was your last day on earth. ^^

A wonderful composition indeed! ^^

~~t. Ally

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Perhaps everyone will have different ways of ending their lives depending on the person or age if today is the end of their lives.

>> CORRECT!

Maybe if I were young, I would scream like a madman and complain to God to save my life.

>> CORRECT!

But now I will look back on my footsteps, say goodbye to my family, finish quietly and leave the world.

>> CORRECT!

But everyone leaves the world without warning.

>> CORRECT!

I also hope to leave this world while I am sleeping.

>> CORRECT!

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