Hi, Ally!

2019-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Fill in the blank: My family is my _______________ because _________________. My family is my most precious treasure because families are the basis of our lives. Just as any living organism is made up of cells, cells are the basis of life, and life phenomena are formed in them, and they are gathered together to become tissues, organs, and another finished individual. So do our society. Each family is gathered to form a village. And when the town is gathered, the city is formed. And the city is gathered and becomes a nation and a global village. So the family is the basis of this society.

강사 첨삭

Hi Son!

I appreciate how much you value your family.

I think it is very sweet and heart warming. ^^

~t. Ally

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My family is my most precious treasure because families are the basis of our lives.

>> CORRECT!

Just as any living organism is made up of cells, cells are the basis of life, and life phenomena are formed in them, and they are gathered together to become tissues, organs, and another finished individual.

>> CORRECT!

So do our society.

>> So does our society.

Each family is gathered to form a village. And when the town is gathered, the city is formed.

>> CORRECT!

And the city is gathered and becomes a nation and a global village.

>> And the city that is put together becomes a nation and a global group of societies.

So the family is the basis of this society.

>> CORRECT!

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