Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Son!
I\'m going to be honest with you, sometimes I have difficulties in saving money as well.
It\'s hard to hold back when you know you have money to spend.
And yes, it does help the economy.
But I also realized that we have to save some money so that we have something to use for emergencies.^^
~~t. Ally
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I don\'t think I\'m good at saving money.
>> CORRECT!
On the other hand, I know how to spend money, so if I get a monthly payment, I do not save, I use it almost and sometimes it becomes negative.
>> On the other hand, I know how to spend money, so if I get a monthly payment, I don\'t save any of it and use most of it up. Sometimes I spend too much.
So my wife always complains about this problem.
>> CORRECT!
However, I think this habit can not change now.
>> However, I think this habit cannot be changed now.
I think making a lot of money and using it well helps our country\'s economy.
>> CORRECT!
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