Hi, Ally!

2019-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Answer the question in 5 sentences: What do you do to save money? I don\'t think I\'m good at saving money. On the other hand, I know how to spend money, so if I get a monthly payment, I do not save, I use it almost and sometimes it becomes negative. So my wife always complains about this problem. However, I think this habit can not change now. I think making a lot of money and using it well helps our country\'s economy.

강사 첨삭

Hi Son!


I\'m going to be honest with you, sometimes I have difficulties in saving money as well.

It\'s hard to hold back when you know you have money to spend.

And yes, it does help the economy.

But I also realized that we have to save some money so that we have something to use for emergencies.^^


~~t. Ally


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I don\'t think I\'m good at saving money. 

>> CORRECT!


 On the other hand, I know how to spend money, so if I get a monthly payment, I do not save, I use it almost and sometimes it becomes negative. 

>> On the other hand, I know how to spend money, so if I get a monthly payment, I don\'t save any of it and use most of it up. Sometimes I spend too much.

 
 So my wife always complains about this problem. 

>> CORRECT!


 However, I think this habit can not change now.

>> However, I think this habit cannot be changed now.


 I think making a lot of money and using it well helps our country\'s economy.

>> CORRECT!

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