Hi, Ally!

2019-04-18 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Answer the question in 5-6 sentences: What are your plans this summer? I can not make any plans for this summer vacation, because I have to take care of my father. I accept that this is my fate because this life has already been a few years. In my country, I think that being born as the firstborn is unhappy on the one hand and happiness on the other, because I share many memories with my parents.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Son!


That\'s alright.

You can always make plans for summer, but you can\'t take back the remaining time you can have with your parents.

You are a very good son! ^^

And I know your father appreciates your love for him. ^^


~t. Ally


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I can not make any plans for this summer vacation, because I have to take care of my father.

>> I cannot make any plans for this summer vacation because I have to take care of my father.


 I accept that this is my fate because this life has already been a few years.

>> I have accepted that this is my fate because it has been this way for years now.


 In my country, I think that being born as the firstborn is unhappy on the one hand and happiness on the other,
because I share many memories with my parents.

>> In my country, I think being the first born is both good and bad at the same time, because despite having more responsibilities, I was able to share more memories with my parents.

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