Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Son!
That\'s alright.
You can always make plans for summer, but you can\'t take back the remaining time you can have with your parents.
You are a very good son! ^^
And I know your father appreciates your love for him. ^^
~t. Ally
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I can not make any plans for this summer vacation, because I have to take care of my father.
>> I cannot make any plans for this summer vacation because I have to take care of my father.
I accept that this is my fate because this life has already been a few years.
>> I have accepted that this is my fate because it has been this way for years now.
In my country, I think that being born as the firstborn is unhappy on the one hand and happiness on the other,
because I share many memories with my parents.
>> In my country, I think being the first born is both good and bad at the same time, because despite having more responsibilities, I was able to share more memories with my parents.
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