Hi, Ally!

2019-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Answer the question in not more than 5 sentences: Why do do do do do stop in Korea Hate Mondays? Do you feel the name way? Why? I feel the tiredest Monday, like everyone else. In Korea, Saturdays and Sundays are holidays in most workplaces. We feel more tired on Mondays if we do various household matters on Saturdays and Sundays . The Saturday and Sunday holidays became a paradox that made Monday more tired. So I am less tired on weekdays to work.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Son!

Thank you for sharing this. ^^

I like how you used new words to describe Mondays!

Great job on this composition ^^

~~t. Ally

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I feel the tiredest Monday, like everyone else.

>> I feel the most tired on Mondays, just like everyone else.

In Korea, Saturdays and Sundays are holidays in most workplaces.

>> CORRECT!

We feel more tired on Mondays if we do various household matters on Saturdays and Sundays .

>> CORRECT!

The Saturday and Sunday holidays became a paradox that made Monday more tired.

>> The Saturday and Sunday holidays became a paradox that made Mondays more tiring.

So I am less tired on weekdays to work.

>> So I am less tired on other weekdays at work.

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