Hi, Ally!

2019-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: What do you think is the biggest difference between your generation verus your partner\' generation? I think most of our parents\' generations lived in an era when the national economy and the home economy was very difficult. My generation lived in a time when our country\'s economy was very developed, so I think our generation experienced difficulties and lived with wealth together. I think our children grew up in a wealthy state, but they are a poor generation to live with worrying about high unemployment and quality of life.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Son!

This is a very good comparison between generations. ^^

Thank you sharing your answer!

I hope the next generations have a better state of economy as well. ^^

~~t. Ally

-----------------------

I think most of our parents\' generations lived in an era when the national economy and the home economy was very difficult.
>> CORRECT!

My generation lived in a time when our country\'s economy was very developed, so I think our generation experienced difficulties and lived with wealth together.
>> CORRECT!

I think our children grew up in a wealthy state, but they are a poor generation to live with worrying about high unemployment and quality of life.

>> I think our children grew up in a wealthy state, but they are a poor generation because they also have to live with worrying about high unemployment rates, as well as quality of life.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기