Hi, Ally!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Son!
I\'ve seen a lot of wonderful photos of Korea and its rich culture! ^^
They truly are beautiful.
I also agree that people in Korea are very diligent and respectful.
It\'s quite sad to see that the regional conflict in your country still hasn\'t been resolved.
But the future holds hope! ^^
So let\'s remain positive.
~~t. Ally
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I like the natural scenery of our country best.
>> CORRECT!
Among them, the mountain is my favorite.
>> Among them, the mountains are my favorite.
And, among the personality we have, I like diligence and culture that respects adults.
>> And when it comes to our personality, I like the diligence and the culture of respecting adults.
But I hate the regional conflict.
>> CORRECT!
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