Hi, Ally!

2019-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: List down 5 that you are absolute has to do on a daily basis. Why did you list these things down? I wake up every morning at 5 and take my blood pressure and diabetes medication first. Second, I watch basic English conversation of beginner course through ebs education broadcasting. Third, I go up to the nearby back mountain and exercise in the sports facility. After breakfast, I go to school and work in daily life. Finally, after dinner, I mainly watch news and dramas on TV, sometimes after hanging out with my friends and then sleeping.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Son! ^^

Thank you for giving a detailed and accurate composition! ^^

It\'s good to know that you stick to your routine daily.

I do hope you always take good care of your health. ^^

~~t. Ally

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I wake up every morning at 5 and take my blood pressure and diabetes medication first.

>> CORRECT!

Second, I watch basic English conversation of beginner course through ebs education broadcasting.

>> Second, I watch basic English conversations for the beginner course through the EBS education broadcasting network.

Third, I go up to the nearby back mountain and exercise in the sports facility.

>> CORRECT!

After breakfast, I go to school and work in daily life.

>> After breakfast, I go to my school, and work as usual.

Finally, after dinner, I mainly watch news and dramas on TV, sometimes after hanging out with my friends and then sleeping.

>> Finally, after dinner, I mainly watch the news and dramas on TV. Sometimes I hang out with my friends and then sleep.

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