Hi\' Ally!

2019-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: What do you use frequently do whensome does something bad to you? First, I find out why someone does such a bad thing to me. I think that most bad behavior comes from misunderstandings. So I think I can figure out why and then solve the misunderstanding, and when the damage is small,I forgive and no longer have a problem. Reaction in the same way can create new conflicts. So I think that all the conflicts should not be covered, but should be solved and removed.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Son!

This is a good composition. ^^

Misunderstandings are better resolved than to be left hanging.

See you in our next class!

~t. Ally

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First, I find out why someone does such a bad thing to me.

>> First, I have to find out why someone does such a bad thing to me.

I think that most bad behavior comes from misunderstandings.

>> I think that most bad behaviors come from misunderstandings.

So I think I can figure out why and then solve the misunderstanding, and when the damage is small,I forgive and no longer have a problem.

>> So I think I can figure out why, then solve the misunderstanding, and if the damage is small, I\'ll forgive the person and resolve the problem.

Reaction in the same way can create new conflicts.

>> Our reactions, in the same way, can create new conflicts.

So I think that all the conflicts should not be covered, but should be solved and removed.

>> So I think that all conflicts should never be hidden, but should be solved and completely removed from the picture.

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