Hi, Ally!

2019-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: Answer the question using 5 senses: What quality of your best friend do you love most? Why? I like the temperance of my close friend, he always hates greed and controls himself. I also envy his economic mind, he has a good way of making money by investing properly, so he has made quite a lot of money. I also like a friend\'s planned life, he runs it right after he designs the future. He has not been drinking or smoking for his health since he was young and has kept it well. So I always envy his planned, controlled life.

강사 첨삭

Hi, sir Son!


I think you are very fond of your close friend. ^^

Instead of feeling envious, maybe it would help you a lot if you made him a model for a better life.

But knowing you, I do believe that you are also living a wonderful life.


~~t. Ally



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I like the temperance of my close friend, he always hates greed and controls himself.
>> CORRECT!


 I also envy his economic mind, he has a good way of making money by investing properly, so he has made quite a lot of money.
>> CORRECT!


 I also like a friend\'s planned life, he runs it right after he designs the future.
>> I also like his way of planning his life. He runs it right after he designs his own future.


 He has not been drinking or smoking for his health since he was young and has kept it well.
>> CORRECT!


 So I always envy his planned, controlled life.

>> So I always envy his planned and controlled life.

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